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My first real photo-manip.
How is it? =/

Sky from =resurgere [link]
Tree from *redheadstock [link]
Birds from *redheadstock [link]
Grass from ~Lyshantia [link]

Critiques


:icontrooper-productions:
The Great Awakening is a very striking piece; it combines an excellent choice of stock in its composition along with a very attactive palette.

There are two points which I feel prevent this work form achieving its full potential:

1. The brushes used for the birds are noticeably repeated, making it seem lass natural.

2. The land looks a little too high on the right; it would have been nice to see a slightly more level terrain which would have given more room above the tree for the birds to swirl.

Even given these two critisicms I still highly rate the picture, especially as this is a first attempt. Hopefully further practice and experimentation will result in increasing improvements.
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:iconkkriminal:
Like a seasoned veteran.

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Rock here in the birch's lap
Swing in the manor of wind
Lay down your weary head
Let the blue stars darken
:iconhaley911:
Love it! Bold color :heart:

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:iconillegal-designs:
great color!

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CHAOTIC STUDIOS: Click for awesomeness.
MYSTIC ACADEMY: Clickehhh
:iconmyassisonfire:
It's good.But maybe less birds.That "cloning" is too visible.
:iconbloodpromiser:
I see what you mean. I was a bit worried about that. =/
Oh well, trial and error. Thanks. =)

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Fashion is an ugly thing.
:icondiabolic-demon:
very cool. thought it was a photo until i read it was a manip.

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i was kind, and visited your gallery, likely leaving a nice comment.
would you do the same? if so...click: [link]

and if you do...thanks.
:iconbloodpromiser:
I wish it was a photo! It would be an amazing scene to see. :lol:
Thanks for the comment. =)

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Fashion is an ugly thing.
:iconhippievan57:
you did great :clap:

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War is not healthy for children and other living things ...

~peace, love and groovy stuff~
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Camera Data

Canon
Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XT
1/180 second
F/5.6
22 mm
100
Jun 5, 2007, 9:23:39 PM

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